All Comments on 'Fire on the Dancefloor Pt. 02 - Louis'

Really enjoyed “Fire on the Dancefloor” pieces and how you connected the two — the first with Nikkie narrating (she is delightfully sexy, blatantly raunchy character) and now Louise. She, too, is interesting in her own way as she explores her bi-side. Both pieces characterized by sassy, engaging dialogue, and intensely erotic sex. Nice character development in Ruth as she emerges; Andy is more or less a prop which works fine for both women. Hope you continue to share both Nikkie and Louise against the dance floor setting (Nikkie was attracted to someone at end of first dance floor piece ) or whatever setting.

That was a nice twist…..

I was expecting to read about Nikkie’s next conquest so was surprised, pleasantly so, to see it was from Louise’s side. The threesome encounter, with a high bias towards the lesbian side was really well done and beautifully described. Did they ever meet up again, or is it going to be a one-off, OR will the next chapter be about the follow on journey that Ruth and Andy take??!!

It’s Penny .. great luv it .. can feel me in her position

Hope to chat more soon xxx