All Comments on 'Fireworks'

5 stars. You have the best during-sex dialog. I always learn something from reading one of your stories (and excited when I see you've posted a new one!) Please keep it up!

Br0kenD0ll,

Thank you for the tasty stars and the kind words. I'm glad that you're enjoying my stories - it's been cool watching you develop your own craft. I do plan to keep writing, and I hope that you do too.

Another great story about impregnation and mind/body conflict. I did notice that the dialog was a bit spaced out and the action started with less buildup than your other stories, but the latter might've been intentional since this is partially a subversion of the romance novels the protagonist reads.

TheDeepThinker,

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I feel like, to a fair extent, this story's quicker pacing is more a matter of my mood than anything else - lots of stories want more buildup, but this one didn't feel like it needed much.

I am so thrilled to see another incredible story from you, thank you thank you.

Coolstrangeravenue,

You are quite welcome, and thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Yaaaaaaaa I think this might be my new favorite erotica like ever. You are a realized artiste, thank you for sharing your gift with us.

Anon,

You are quite welcome, and thank you!

Wow, that was incredibly hot. Very well written and extremely sexy. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories now.

Akirababe87,

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I have quite a few other stories that play with similar themes, and I hope you enjoy them too.