All Comments on 'First Contact'

by Abelard7

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Remain_in_shadowRemain_in_shadowover 11 years ago
It was ok

Kind of clinical, in a familiar way. Detached.

ShadowlandsShadowlandsover 11 years ago
Great start.... please continue

Had me from the very beginning, then surprised me by its brevity. I trust this is a teaser to be followed by more adventures. I do so enjoy this genre, and fully appreciate the enjoyment had by watching your partner, well, be had so to speak.

Write soon, write often....... and thank you.

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