All Comments on 'First Cum, First Serve Pt. 02'

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DeathcakesDeathcakesover 5 years ago
Oh my God this was so hot

I loved the first chapter the second was just as good I like how you used the victim of the first story in the second one. I have to admit that i enjoy having what happen to Lezlee. I can't wait until another chapter.

milkyrosemilkyroseabout 5 years ago
hot!

I'd really love it if you continued this series!

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 4 years ago

Excellent story. Looking forward to reading more diner adventures.

wildflower2176wildflower2176about 4 years ago
;)

this series definitely needs more chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great story!

This is the strongest I've ever wished to be the guy in on of your stories, as embarrassing as that is to admit...

adumbtwinkgirladumbtwinkgirlover 2 years ago

This has such a nice ending. I'd love to see this continued somehow, maybe with a willing boy getting femmed up next? Or maybe some other story with that same kind of friendzoned dynamic. It's really hot but really hard to find. Thank you for writing such great stories!

fire1173fire1173over 1 year ago

Def deserves a few sequels

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