All Comments on 'First Date'

by Sluttysocialite

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good start

Your working of a familiar plot has a nice feel and pace. It reads well and I suspect is autobiographical (or at least a romanticized version). A few more details regarding your physiological and psychological arousal would add to the story.

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