All Comments on 'First Day Out'

Insanely hot, and nice to see a trans story that isn't full of misinformation and veiled transphobia!

I love it, a good trans affirming story is pretty rare to see here but i gladly accept it

I really enjoyed this as well. It’s really lovely, thank you!

Amazing story I love it so much!

this made me extremely happy to read, thank you for sharing a hot, joyous, trans-affirming story

@Rambling_Chantrix thank you for the praise, that's really nice to hear! I've been enjoying your stories greatly!

aw = )

Can't wait for more! Please make this a series

Finally! Trans affirming erotica! 10/10!

I would hope a trans affirming story would make efforts to combat the perpetuation of outdated gender binaries, or at least avoid mentioning them. The thought of a world where everyone's pronouns and sexuality are publicly displayed sounds truly hellish; the reduction of everyone's complex gender identities and sexualities down to a single word. Perhaps one could argue it makes sense in a free use fantasy, since it is just a fantasy after all. But if it is a fantasy, should we not hope to see a world where gender stereotypes are not perpetuated at all?

Obviously this story does a far better job socially than the large majority of transphobic, misogynistic garbage on this site - it just dissapoints me it didn't go far enough.

To the person complaining about the gender binary, seriously? Nowhere does it say those were the only pronouns available to her. Im sure any number of pronouns were available for enbies and xenbies and bigenders and all the other colours of the spectrum, this character just happened to want to be female. If the character wanted to be labelled xe/xer im sure the bracelet would have let them,

As well the trans themes (transgirls represent woot woot!) i also really like the free use setting! Its one of my favourite tropes and its super rare in written fiction! I only mostly see it in hentai comics. So nice to see it written erotica.

The girl at the end though. She really knows the universal weakness of trans girls, being praised and called good girl.

Id read so many stories of them together because gosh does being pegged and called a good girl by another woman just hit the spot.