All Comments on 'First Ever Blowjob'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Good premise.

But sex happens too fast.

Even if this was the first timeshe gave a blowjob, they must have made out before. She'd certainly had an idea of how big his cock was even if she'd never handled it outside of his clothes before.

There should have been more foreplay. And there should have been some involvement with her breasts. And why is she still clothed anyway?

Snd you wrote HAUNCHED (which is not even a verb; it's a noun meaning hip or hindquarter, or ass). You meant HUNCHED, which means bent over.

Four stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very good descriptions of blowjob. Many women use the "I've never done this before" line. It makes guy feel so good, thinking he is the first.

longrider9longrider9almost 2 years ago

I think that it is a fantastic story!!! Great example of a young woman giving her first blowjob.

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