All Comments on 'First Excursion'

Loved this story. Simple but very enjoyable.

Nice to read about something dear to my heart (nudity, outdoors and masturbation) and in a location that i have visited on many an ocassions and often though about doing!

Keep it up, more please

M

Very sexy. I think your hints at the start about other people finding the character would have made this into an even sexier piece of fiction. Imagine if the character had been tied up by a group of boy scouts, or humiliated by a gang of teenagers. Still, a story does not always have to keep pushing to extremes to be good, and I enjoyed this one. Thanks.