All Comments on 'First Flight'

There is no setup for a second part.

Hope you continue their story!

Outstanding beginning of a hopefully longer story...

Like your story I flew into an airport with my sick plane, one engine gone and a glide landing of sorts. Met a girl with same name as your guy. Now 25 years later Tricia my wife with our three kids make a good happy family. By the way are all fliers now as well. Sick plane caused a happy married life. So would like to see more posts on this story..

This is just a sexual encounter and seems like enough, if that's what the reader is looking for. There is little or no reason to continue.

Definitely more please.

I’d like to see more, however, I’d also like it to be more readable; past tense and logical sentences will make it much easier and enjoyable to read.

This was so good, please write more!

You are getting too soft. Normally a story like this would have you in a rabid rage. I guess you had too much spiked egg nog for New Years.

I was very hesitant to submit this for public consumption. It was meant for one specific reader but I was encouraged to allow everyone here on lit to enjoy it.

For those of you with constructive feedback, I’ll try on part two to improve my writing skills.