All Comments on 'First Kiss'

by SmoothandLovely

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LuganisLuganisabout 1 month ago

Great story, but I couldn’t say if it was really a gay story. The dilemma Rachel is facing won’t be easy to handle. You manage to end the story right in time. Now you could keep it open as it is or write a second part.

DavidPatrickDavidPatrick24 days ago

I think this may be in the wrong category. I expected a gay story, not an incest story.

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