All Comments on 'First Little Piggy Pt. 03'

A redo on a fairy tale? Or a nightmare you had as a child? Which ever, it sure made no sense. UGH!

You really do not have any ability as a writer

I liked the story. It was missing some prologue that explained the world they lived in, and the situation each character found themselves in. I would have liked to hear a bit more backstory for all of the characters to explain why the reacted the way they did. I think adding that would make the story so much better.

Love the story, not many stories about piggy-petplay. Perhaps a few more chapters? Am curious to read more about what lady wolf will do with the piggies, and how the piggies will perceive their different experiences of adapting into their new lives.