All Comments on 'First Mate Ch. 01'

Good-----keep writing please. 5 stars.

Very realistic. Missed every trope, stereotype and meme swirling around in the primordial erotic soup of LW! THAT is a 5 just by itself. You wrote extremely well and realistically as you delved into the dynamics of these two couples. Gene is not that unusual, but on LW that realistic outcome is never written about. Erotic and very well done. 5/5!!!

I always thought sharing your whore was nothing more than cuckolding. Your tags say the same thing.

Well written and totally realistic in every sense , totally believable . Obi, you have talent and I’m looking forward to the next story by you !

I gave it a 5. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Five stars, very hot. I could so see listening to your better half going at it being a distraction.

Thanks for sharing, Jackie.

Very Hot!!