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All Comments on 'First Momma, Then Daughter'

by FRANGY

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Dialogue not natural

The story was hot .... until one of the characters said something. I'm sorry but that dialogue needs work. Otherwise, fine story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
LOL

That was funny. Quite the racial role reversal of a lot of stories on here. Eleven inches. LOL.

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