All Comments on 'First Sexual Contact'

Grammar. Proof read everything.

How is this remotely a first time? It's more along the lines of fetish. Oh, and get an editor, please.

Fair play Mr or Mrs anonymous on anonymously calling me out. The grammar is a working progress. Sorry if it ruined the enjoyment of anything. The selection of categories to suit wasn't quite available. That was a first time sexual contact between us both. Ok not sex! But sexual nonetheless. So that's where it went.

OK as an intro, but not yet a story. You write as you speak, without realising your errors. This makes it difficult for the reader who keeps stopping. For non-UK readers it must be even harder. Use Word or Google Docs to get most of these, then pass through Grammarly. As an example, ‘I’d of cum everywhere’. I’m sure that seems like what you say, but actually it’s ‘I would have cum…’, which is contracted to ‘I’d ‘ve cum…’

You see, that is constructive. Totally different to the last. I'll take comments like that on board each and every time

I enjoyed this story, looking forward to part 2

Thank you very much. There will definitely be more