All Comments on 'First Time'

You lost me at 'boyoty' in the description. Pity.

No plot and no suspense, but as stroke it was first rate

Same old lick, suck & fuck. Non-existent plot is about what to expect in a grade 'B' porno flick. Author needs an editor & needs to learn rules about structure & dialogue. I suggest looking at the 'How to' category in Literotica.

I could visualize it all the way and felt the ex citement of a woman who had derived herself of sex for a long time. I have no idea whence the negative comments.

I gave you a 3 stars could have been a 2-21/2, story went too fast no build up or decription of either one of them, the sex was your only saving grace.

You can make a short story out of: I took her behind the barn and fucked her The End!

A good story is one the reader can see the people in their mind while reading.