All Comments on 'First Time Excitement'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Thanks, Dan!

Sweet, subtle and spot on. Go for another story that's a bit longer!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
1 Star

Reads like an instruction manual

Needs more build up and detail

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
5 stars

Very well written and hot.

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