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KinPAKinPAalmost 2 years ago

Continuity…is George 38 or in his mid 40s?

MarsStarsMarsStarsalmost 2 years ago

I like the premise and will continue to read the story. However continuity and proof reading is needed. I’d suggest finding an editor to proof your work. Other than that like I said the premise is good and I’ll continue to keep reading.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Another fantasy of an ultimate beauty and an incomparable lover, who, of course, is a tragic loner. Is the reader supposed to identify with anyone in this story?

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