All Comments on 'Five'

Brilliant start. I hope the body mods are a mind fuck for Five and not just mentioned in passing. Very interested in where this is going. I would of thought his first butt plug would be a fear, excitement, trepidation moving to acceptance that was before it went in. It was like his first bowl of food on the floor passed over as it was a well rehearsed already. But I give 5 stars. 👍

As usual, a thrilling tale from you. Adore reading your work; you have a real understanding of the desires, motivations, and pleasures of both men and women, Dominants and submissives. Please don't tease us too long before the next story!

I do love the way you write, soppingwetpanties. The way you use backstory to develop and enrich your stories. Please consider writing part 2 of this lovely tale.

loving it so far would love to be number 5 cant wait for the next chapter

thank you soppingweypanties

Some of your best work yet. Looking forward to part II.

Very well written, it ebbs and flows so nicely.

Part II (Please)

The depth and detail is interesting- especially that Acadia is not a costumed leather domme, and enjoys the control and humiliation of sub David without allowing him to ever be her sexual partner, and that David falls in love with her desire for control and gives up most of himself to accept her instructions and knows she will trade him out as a sub just for her amusement. Lots of non- typical ideas here, looking forward to more...

More, your fans need more.

Excellent start, a great combination of an engaging story and erotic scenes. I look forward to see where you'll take the story next.

Thank you for the beginning of another super story. Just as Acadia sees deep into the mind of her sub and plays it, you play with the minds of your readers.

By far the best story I've ever read. David is living his best life.

To say that this story is well-written is an understatement.

I loved this story.

Wonderful!

Excellent writing and plot.

Amazing intense domination, submission, and humiliation.

I need to let myself process all the emotions.....

Another amazing moving story! Mistress SWP you are an amazing woman and author to bring my desires to serve to life! I must admit to cumming twice already reading 2 of your stories. Thank you from my heart, bringing to life my desires to serve a woman such as you my Goddess!

yours, aslutboi

I wonder if Gamma will b e punished or if Arcadia set it all up for Gamma to use Five? Either way, it was hot!

Your writing is so provocative, tormenting pleasure. I love it!

I have a sub, you're having think of other ways to humiliate him for our mutual enjoyment.