All Comments on 'Five Mums Ch. 24 - Away We Go Pt. 03'

Great story. I have followed this through all 23 chapters. Like some others have commented on I like how you give each character. No matter how small their role a backstory. It really helps paint a picture of what they are like. Also tje tongue in cheek humour. And the characterisation that Yana sometimes doesn't turn the russian off in her head. I like it. Wondering how many to come. It's also good that these last few chaptets 'away we go' could be read as a stand alone story by themselved. 11/10

I hope Yana and Jay have fun with her purchase

I like the back story and how the background is elaborated on. a lot of stories are just stand>Fuck>cum. But I've read all 24 chapters and a few things struck me. 1) The background to everyone's characters,2) How your writing has improved. Keep it up. Wonder what happens next. I am also concerned like some others have commented on, what is Andrew planning?

Keep going, I like how the tale has progressed with each characters back story and little quirks. Like Yana's clingyness.

Yep, backstories and humour are good