All Comments on 'Fleeting Fuck...Or Was It?'

Intriguing and intensely erotic like your other short pieces — at least potentially so. I must confess confusion over who is whom — maybe deliberate on your part and if so that is wicked. Alas, I spent too much time going back over lines/paragraphs, which was a bit deflating or frustratingly erotic. Obviously I enjoy reading your short vignettes.