All Comments on 'Flight Ch. 06'

found this book last night and literally could not put my phone down, you write so well!

Its an amazing story. You have created a world where everyone is interesting and some stories (like Sati and Rover), i would like to know more about BUT i feel like im doing alot of reading and you are avoiding writing too much about Mina and Archer. As a reader, im here to find out about their past, their chemistry, their relationship and its mostly alluded to as opposed to written about. I also get very confused with the first person/3rd person writing and the random one liners that were in this chapter. Can i suggest spending some time on the main couple in the next few chapters? And getting an editor? Its still a great story.

Great story. I too want to know more about mina and archer’s past dynamic. Archer is a very memorable character and well written

Too many points of view happening, all of them too short to really get into each one which results in confusion. Switching up can work, but with 2ish POV and much more organization. It feels like the trajectory of the story is not planned. -lilmeow

@Anonymous, thank you for the advice! I'm not going to follow any of it <3

Brilliant story