All Comments on 'Flight Ch. 07'

Archer is a slut who needs a knife to his dick.

Archer is not so bad just a bit fucked up over Mina. The series is more hit and then miss. Perfection is so hard to achieve, pleasing everyone is impossible.

So far I have enjoyed the experience and very much appreciate the effort put in. It brightens my day when I see a new chapter posted.I particularly like the various characters and emerging backgrounds. And of course the sex.

Wow this story is addicting, it’s always at the front of my mind when looking for new posts. I love all of the characters despite the urge to strangle some at times. Overall I hope you’re doing well and will continue to eagerly wait for more :D

I know there's a diamond in the rough here! These scenes are good but disorganized. A clutter of snapshots from different times and perspectives does not a good story make, regardless the skill of the writer.

I liked it a lot when we were with Mina and sometimes Archer's perspective. If you must have more, maybe the insights of Alma as she tries to find her friend and the extra team trying to uncover the murders makes sense. Having the ramblings of every person on Archer's team with no rhyme or reason confuses the reader and is ultimately fluff. If these extra scenes are living in your head, perhaps small spinoffs are more productive to the overall world you're trying to build. -lilmeow

Always come back to this and was so thrilled to see you posted a new chapter!

Love both your stories. Looking forward to more.. hopefully.

Its really good. You clearly have alot to give and for Ricci to be so dangerous is such a great twist. Theres just alot going on and so many perspectives that it dilutes the archer/mina story. For example, i thought you were about to expand on their previous relationship but it was just old feelings from mina. I’d love to read about how he picked her, became obsessed and how he drew her in. What she battled with. Then, the difference in their current interaction would mean more. But thats alot of writing!

Please have scenes from the dark seduction of mina!! Want all the obsessive sexy details. Also, poor kora, her standards are so low from being a victim.

This is one of my favorite series. Every chapter pulls me in. If you ever publish/self-publish, let us know. I would love to follow you!

How devastating it was to catch up to your submissions. This is good, really really good. I'm curious about every character, hungry for every word. Deflated that I can't find out what happened next RIGHT NOW. I went to sleep reading and woke up exciting to continue. More please. MOAAARR

You've done such an amazing job fleshing out the tensions between these characters, and I can tell you're still laying groundwork for more of the story to come through. I can't wait to read more as you continue to post.

Please please please update. I can't wait any longer. Love this story!

I knew a Scorpio girl called Mina who was very kinky. Could’ve been sweeter to her, and I really hope she’s doing well!