All Comments on 'Fling Maybe?'

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It's beautiful and romantic and hot and one of the best sex scenes in a shower. more!!!

How did they meet? Did he love her from their first meeting? Please explain! Love these characters. Thank you.ddd

Thanks for the feedback. Chapter 2 is already submitted and waiting approval. It will provide more background and insight of the characters while also keeping it sexy!

I do love a Ginger! Can't wait to see what comes next. This one's a scorcher!

I like the way you jump right in and tell the story...looking forward to chapter 2

Yep, nothing but WOW!!!!

Hot and so intimate. The dual voice narrative was really effective here. It can sometimes feel like it's cheating but the way you jumped in mid coitus, it really allowed us to go deeper. I can't wait to see where this goes.

Hotter than LAVA! More, more, more!

Can anyone say with all honesty this 1st chapter did not make them wet? Oh My Goodness, Greg...you keep eating like that! Whew! I would kill to be in Monette's place!

5 stars plus 2 thumbs up!

I too have had a very similar experience with a ebony goddess. Almost 27 years ago to this day. We met through a mutual friend and she was going to move to another state. Also a professional dancer. We ended up in a hotel for the weekend because there was a heated indoor pool. To make a long story short, in October we'll be celebrating our 27th wedding anniversary.

Complete horse sh*t. Greg O'Brien is a joke.. Dirty, drug addict, loser.

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