by leeleeMarie
Complete horse sh*t. Greg O'Brien is a joke.. Dirty, drug addict, loser.
I too have had a very similar experience with a ebony goddess. Almost 27 years ago to this day. We met through a mutual friend and she was going to move to another state. Also a professional dancer. We ended up in a hotel for the weekend because there was a heated indoor pool. To make a long story short, in October we'll be celebrating our 27th wedding anniversary.
Can anyone say with all honesty this 1st chapter did not make them wet? Oh My Goodness, Greg...you keep eating like that! Whew! I would kill to be in Monette's place!
5 stars plus 2 thumbs up!
Hot and so intimate. The dual voice narrative was really effective here. It can sometimes feel like it's cheating but the way you jumped in mid coitus, it really allowed us to go deeper. I can't wait to see where this goes.
I like the way you jump right in and tell the story...looking forward to chapter 2
I do love a Ginger! Can't wait to see what comes next. This one's a scorcher!
Thanks for the feedback. Chapter 2 is already submitted and waiting approval. It will provide more background and insight of the characters while also keeping it sexy!
How did they meet? Did he love her from their first meeting? Please explain! Love these characters. Thank you.ddd
It's beautiful and romantic and hot and one of the best sex scenes in a shower. more!!!