All Comments on 'Fool in The Rain'

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MarcLuciFerMarcLuciFer11 months ago

Nice mood inspiring story with a great and even humorous ending. Loved it! Well done, MVP6.

MVP6MVP611 months agoAuthor

Thank you for your always kind comments.

Tcs1956Tcs195610 months ago

I’m glad the young man found his hidden desire for cocksucking! Hopefully he confesses to his love and she encourages him… even cuckolds him. Great start to a hot series!

PG564EPG564E10 months ago

a riveting description of a man giving his first blow job. Made me very hard and my memory of my first blow job alive again. It was as perfect and natural as you wrote. Hard thickness, spongy soft, so wet and smooth, so large having a big dick in my small mouth - I knew I wanted this more than anything else in life. To make a man quiver and shake, then groan loudly as his dick pumped streams of semen into my ravenous mouth. So wonderful!

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