All Comments on 'Fool’s Contract'

Thanks for writing this - really an excellent story. I enjoyed it quite a bit - both for the erotic content and the characters.

I enjoyed the set up and details, and the overall idea was interesting as were the two main characters. On the constructive critique side; I know this is a contest story and has a deadline, but if that deadline wasn't an issue I think this story deserved a lot more 'telling'. At just 1-1/2 pages it seemed rushed, the foundation for a great love story is here though. Maybe once the contest is over, you might one day pick up your pen and tell the story of love, and of villains dispatched. Good idea though and worth a good score from me.

Lovely story very well written as always. Thank you.

Awesome story as usual, is Ham the same character that you used in another story, one of your novellas I believe??