All Comments on 'Football Practice Ch. 03'

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Nephlim14Nephlim14over 8 years ago
YES!!!

Finally a little gender equality in a cfnm story. Please keep it going!

abc101abc101over 12 years ago
great story

please write more

mikey04mikey04almost 13 years ago
love this series

please keep it up this series rocks

austin_voyaustin_voyalmost 13 years ago
Agreed

This definitely has much more to it.

lucci53lucci53almost 13 years ago
good......

but this feels unfinished, like you left it half way through a chapter. I mean this not as a criticism but as a plea for more, maybe involving a physical development of the relationship between Alice and Dave. Keep writing :)

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