by Shehasnicebutt2
I laughed. Dude addicted to semen after one night of spousal abuse. Hilarious.
I think it is a perfect story and exactly on point... i mean consider the number of men that wish to have anal sex, but would never bother going down on a woman? That is simply cracked.... another way of admitting being gay i say !
Um, why not go down on her BEFORE fucking her, give her a couple of orgasms first. Most guys aren't going to come so quickly after the first time, either.
It wasn't that she didn't have an orgasm as much as her fetish to have him eat cum, right? If it was about the orgasm he could eat her out BEFORE the intercourse and bring her to her first orgasm and then she could do the same for him. Second time around he would last longer and of course they can pause a few times (edge).
So a sort of sexy story about a wife that wants her husband to eat his own cum out of her pussy.
Meh...
A bit rushed wouldn't you say? He goes from grossed out to cum-slut in seconds? It would have been a lot better story if you'd drawn it out, let us see some of the "nice" character where he learned to appreciate his wife and do it for her sake.
But most men would do this with there wife.As long as nothing was said in public or to friends. Most men want there wife to cut also .
When someone takes the time to leave a comment its pretty cool! When they say a story made them laugh it's even better. Thanks for the laugh back at ya!
I was saddened when I read this story. Your sixth submission, the other five all 4.0 and higher. Then you stated off with,
She got dressed and went to the bathroom.
Ted told Elaine as he was getting dressed.
They both showered and headed off to their jobs.
The last time I showered with my clothes on, there was noway I was going to work like that.
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Why would she marry him knowing he can't satisfy her? To satisfy herself she demeans, degrades and humiliates him. How long is this marriage going to last. A couple of days or weeks and then it's divorce court. No one is that dumb.
1 star
a woman's needs all ways ends the marriage or the husband become a willing cuckold.