All Comments on 'For Old Times Sake'

Excellent first effort. Good story line. Paced well.

What kind of cars back seat has this much room? 20 degrees and she’s not wearing a coat and her shoulder and midriff are showing? He’s in love with her but leaves the car after they just had steamy sex and doesn’t even say goodbye? The tension between them was very sexy but some of the details especially the way it ended, were really off.

Lost me when the temperatures are terrible but she walks in with a loose sweater and bare midriff!!!

I appreciate the notes! Definitely could have fleshed out the ending better, and it’s good insight to know that I need to pay better attention to things that I might think are minor. I appreciate it.