All Comments on 'For the Love of Vicki'

by ChassonKnight

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notyourcuppateanotyourcuppatea8 months ago

Loved it. Bravo!

❤️❤️🔥🔥🔥

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Nicely done, will be looking forward to another chapter as well as any other writing from you. Thanks for posting this. Again Nicely done.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Hated it! Next time, no sharing and NO lesbian sex!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Loved it, hope you write a second part...

ScottishTexanScottishTexan8 months ago

The ink and piercings on Vicki ruined it for me. I also would have enjoyed it more if Sarah had become more enamored with her brother instead of trying to "keep him in his place". It would have gone nicely hand-in-hand with his payback scene where he was working out his frustrations on Sarah after he was inside of her. She doesn't have to become submissive, but falling in love with her brother and wanting to make love to him regularly would have been very satisfying. Without any improvement in their relationship after their sexual encounter, I couldn't give you top marks. 2/5

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Loved it, waiting for the second part..

Hoping you will make this a series

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Loved it, waiting for the second part..

hope you will make this a series.🙂

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I'm a fairly dull 50 year old heterosexual male from the UK. About the only interesting thing I've done is author an interactive erotica ebook for kindle.