by ChassonKnight
Nicely done, will be looking forward to another chapter as well as any other writing from you. Thanks for posting this. Again Nicely done.
The ink and piercings on Vicki ruined it for me. I also would have enjoyed it more if Sarah had become more enamored with her brother instead of trying to "keep him in his place". It would have gone nicely hand-in-hand with his payback scene where he was working out his frustrations on Sarah after he was inside of her. She doesn't have to become submissive, but falling in love with her brother and wanting to make love to him regularly would have been very satisfying. Without any improvement in their relationship after their sexual encounter, I couldn't give you top marks. 2/5