All Comments on 'For The Whored: The Future: Ch. 40'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Why?

Why is nobody worried about the stolen stuff? Why is nobody worried about the Bradley look a like? Why did Lydia not feel that Warg stuff? Why is the storyline not important anymore? Why did Bradley fall in love so quick?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Congratulations…

On improving your scene transitions. The change is noticeable and welcome; pushes my rating from a consistent 4 to 5.

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