All Comments on 'Forbidden Ch. 02'

still dont get the incest angel

Anon,

I think the incest will come in to explain the bruise on her face. Just a hunch.

Author,

Excellently erotic story so far. Please keep up this high level of writing.

This story is shaping up to be good. Hopefully the ending wont be premature or sloppy.

student teacher is taboo.

I think the incest is coming. Didnt it say they bith have red hair? Hes spanish and shes half spanish...connect the dots people and quit complaining.

Almost pure and innocent young girl giving herself to an older man, that is really hot.

He needs to find out what really happened to her to give her a bruise on her face.

Thanks for the read.

You have tweaked some domination into this as well as forbidden; nice touch.

RS

This story is done really well. It makes me think of my teacher crush and wish he and I could be in this position.

Lots of wrong words, misspellings and runon sentences makes it difficult to read fluidly. Srory line is rather weak and far fetched. 10 inches? Ha!

Lots of typos and syntax errors they disrupted the story