by X-Factor
So this is meant as a constructive criticism. I first came across your works 6 years ago. Your Marriage troubles and on the side pleasure series were my personal favourites because erotic stories involving indian women and white guys were rare, and good ones rarer still.
But since then, society has changed big time. It is not all uncommon to see Indian women with white guys. Indian women, especially ones who grew up in the West now marry out all the time. So that mystique is gone.
The Priya of today is a westernized white worshipping brown woman who longs for white men to colonize her curry cunt just like her ancestors were colonised
The story indeed a erotic one one spells about every man dream for such incident and loving sis-in–law....gReat going...Do keep updating and suggest to end on happy node..If possible
to get behind this storyline unless the characters start advancing in serious ways. Both "mates" aren't very curious about their partner's activities and although the "players" are taking different risks in terms of upping the public nature of their couplings, this is very static: it's basically Priya showing up wearing something different and/or both of them hooking up somewhere different.