All Comments on 'Forbidden Ch. 13'

So one thing that you do well in your stories is convey to the audience or at least to me, is how a couple even if adulterous have sex. The passion.

I am also curious, in a lot of your series it seems to be Indian women who are female love interests. I was just curious about that.

Keep up the good work

The latest chapter in this story is very well done, with an engaging plot, supplemented by romantic love. While this story would have been better without the adulterous element, there is no denying its overall excellence. Five stars.

I never understood the adultery stigma when it's a fictional work. I have a very engaging discussion going about this on my Twitter account. But basically, fake S&M is widely accepted and fake adultery is not. Very confusing and I'm curious to hear other viewpoints.

Thank you very much for the kind words everyone - I appreciate you taking the time, because I know you don't have to.

nAn author who makes feelings physically tangible through words alone. Simply great. This is true eroticism, intimate kissing in harmony with the act of love.

One longs for more.

Ok, I don’t understand, either Priya is Indian or West Indian? Which is it as this chapter she is Indian and before she was West Indian