All Comments on 'Forbidden Ch. 14'

The story is really good, but the writing and repeating of the same words during intimacy is kind of a dummer.. I get the both don't want to take a risk in others finding out but it would be fun if they plan a getaway just the 2 of them with her kid like a real couple and try some fun public PDA outside their living area.

Excellent Story, Matthew and Priya needs to get away for weekend and Matthew must knock Priya up. They must finally admit there love for one another and find a way to be with eachother all the the time.

The latest chapter in this story is a riveting romantic drama, but to properly appreciate it, it is important to read the previous chapters first. As good as it is, this chapter is not a stand-alone story. Five stars as always.

I mean, I have been reading stories on this site for a couple of years now. Pretty much every which way you can write a story has been written. I think the author does a very good job of conveying sensuality. So well done to X Factor. I mean he can change it up later on.

If there is one minor quibble I have with the author with the cultural portrayal. Priya, having lived in the West already comes across as A bit more prudish than normal.

For example, I had an on and off affair with a married Indian woman at my workplace starting from a work conference years ago. From conversations with her, I understood Indian women are enamored with women. So Priya will not only readily start an affair with Matthew, but will divorce Raj in an instant for Matthew.

The woman that I was seeing, in the throes of lovemaking will shout how she is colonised brown slit who is nothing more than a cocksleeve for white men

The above is coming within 3-5 chapters ;)

Reading through these stories, I know it seems as though years are passing. But really it's just been a handful of rendezvous and they've only been together for a couple of months

.....of any story I have ever read within this genre. This authors incredibly lucid description of lovemaking puts the reader at the foot of their bed. Five stars for each and every chapter were no-brainers. I hope further chapters are quickly forthcoming. SO good.