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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
After a long wait

The chapter is here. Good to see our white worshiping indian store price back

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
excellent story telling

The story continues in chapter 15 of Forbidden, and it is equally good, with a wonderful romantic atmosphere throughout. Five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wonderful

A great author, the anatomy of the act of love has seldom been described so realistically.The wonderful syncronicity of the kisses and the act are just wonderfully described. The author has the rare gift of making the deepest feelings, lust and deep love tangible through words.

Thank you and keep up the good work..........

Greetings from Germany

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This story should be called Groundhog Day. Every chapter is the same. The description of the lovemaking is very predictable.

Evil_MonarchEvil_Monarchover 1 year ago

there should be a foot fetish tag in this story

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