All Comments on 'Forbidden Garden Ch. 03: Budding'

If you had actually read this before pressing "Submit", I would hope you would have noticed how unnatural both dialogue and narrative are. If it sounds unlike what you experience on a daily basis in conversations, than you're doing it wrong.

If you don't think you need to read it before submitting, then you're either a lazy fuck or a dumb fuck.

Stop doing it wrong, or just stop doing it

It's time for breeding all around. Bring on the pollination of Iris. He needs to remove all birth control from his 3 future daughter/wives. Pollinate all of their flowers. Next chapter soon. 5☆

Family is full of stupid sluts. No wonder you dumb fucks eat this shit up.

Don't mind the haters. Nothing wrong with a nice fun and over the top story.

So many red flag. What a dick.