All Comments on 'Forbidden Lizzy'
by Alex_Lockheed
- 41 Comments
bananashake1997about 4 years agoIt really fucking real story. You are a gifted writer. Keep it up
DianeRedfernabout 4 years agoTerrific four-pager. Got me wet. Definitely need to read more.
xoxo,
Di
EnjoyBothabout 4 years agoLusciously and erotically well done! Waiting for where this one heads to in your next installment.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoYou are a great writer! I hope you will add more chapters to this one!
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoPlease do continue. I very much enjoyed the lead up, the consummation and the initial aftermath. The sex was scorching hot and well worth the wait.
Dawn191270almost 4 years agoHi omg your so gifted , please carry on show us where Lizzie and Mark will go . The two will become one and this love between them will blossom xxx
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoTo be honest, as far as i know, this is the first of your stories that I have read. I haven't even checked your bio to see if there are other stories, but I will! This was a great story. Well written. Followed a good sequence. You wrote with feeling in your words. Not everyone may like your writing style, but I did. Hope there is a Chapter 2 to this story. This is the 1st story of this type that I have read. I found it pretty hot. Thanks for your efforts.
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoThis storyline could go forward in so many directions. I would like to see you do that with more segments added to this beginning. Take care, be well & stay healthy.
sithangel1almost 4 years agoThat was simply amazing. A great combo of story, tease, and sex. I could see the screens in my mind's eye and I actually came very hard myself at the end. I want to see more. As a lover of sexy trans women, I say bravo. Waiting for more Lizzy.
Rapierwit24601almost 4 years agoYou should do a bit more editing, though. Too many silly errors.
RodimusMikealmost 4 years agoIt seems like Lizzy and Mark are meant for each other,but Judy I take it has feelings for Mark also,but he likes Lizzy more.But from the authors POV Judy seems like a genetic girl,whereas Lizzy is a Hermaphrodite or Shemale who was born with a cock.
Sadly I wish Judy was one too,so Mark could have Sister Shemales to be with both and both wouldn't have to do without.I hope the author decides to do a part 2,and have either Judy be a closeted shemale or she has a medical problem where she turns into a girl with something extra,that would be sweet as hell.Later.
L O Reinsalmost 4 years agoYes. Great story and really good writing. Diff would like to read more in this series.
GrrrreatImaginationalmost 3 years agoThe first 10 comments Lit showed me all asked for more of this passionate story. I hope you will share more of this tale with us. So many ways it could go.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoWhat a great character build up with great action. Please tell more of thier story!!!
Sin_Full_Metalover 2 years agoI'm seeing comments over a year old and no part 2! Please put I'm us out of our misery
Rapier875over 2 years agoLike so many other stories on here, this isn't going to be finished, is it ?
So very disappointing............
Rapier
Anonymousabout 2 years agoLoved it! Bravo! Quite well done! The storyline moved along at a good pace. Yet there was a nice bit of the emotional aspect, and suspense intertwined.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoExcellent, needs another chapter or two. My special lady & i thinks she should be more submissive, mild masochism maybe. We enjoyed your story.
Anonymousover 1 year agoI truly enjoyed the story and want more. Good characters, excitement, drama and great sex. Yes more please.
Anonymous12 months agoLovely storey, well written. loved Lizzy and Mark - you fleshed them out to the point where I really liked them as people. Though this was written some 3 years ago I would very much like to read more.
Thanks for your time and efforts writing these stories (loved Jenna as well). I get the impression that it takes a lot more time and effort than you would think to do this, particularly to this standard.
