All Comments on 'Forced Into a Whore on the Train'

Bit of an emotional journey at the start, could have fleshed out the sex a bit more, a bit more dialogue but I mostly really enjoyed it! Thanks <3

Good but if you write out the dialog it will be better

I need to try this! The train whore hmmmm I would be a great whore 💋

I feel like it was a bit rushed at the end but overall it was good. Keep writing!

I felt this had a lot of promise, but didn’t really deliver.

Nice scene with huge potential!

Thanks

Tess (uk)