by Soma99
I really liked it. The tone is light and funny. You must be a really cool chick with a GREAT attitude!
Good writing, good premise, good execution.
I loved this story, very erotic and well written. Sex for money stories are a big favourite of mine. Please write more !
Kinda had a you-were-there feel. Or at least an I'm-telling-you-what -happened-when-I-was-there feel.
At least it was not like a lot of sex for pay Literotica stories where the guy is dressed like a movie star, is 35 years old, has a body like a professional athlete, a dick like a porn star, and is more concerned to pleasure her than himself. So I give it 5 stars for realism.
Paul in Oklahoma
Sexy and Sad at the same time. Tricky to pull off. Kudos.
Loved the last line call back.