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by jpenrod

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
change of name

How come the husband's name changes from David in the 2nd paragraph to John?

tendernsweet2tendernsweet2over 7 years ago
Real...

His real name is "David - John - Jim - Jack - Bob - Tony - Bill" - wellllll you get the idea.!?

He decided if her name was "Amber - Bambi - Cathi - Donna - Edith - Faith - you get the idea ~~ then he could be different men also...!!** ??

Cute story though.*

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great story!

Even with the name change, good story line.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Name changes, capitalization... A million mistakes!

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