All Comments on 'Forgotten Ch. 07'

hi glad to find ur chapter this eve. Though its long span of time, but because i like ur story so i reread from ch 5 hehehe. Refresh d mind...

Can't wait for the next chapter. Hope it isn't a long wait.

i'm wondering why peter would be missing. If he was being watched by all those supernaturals. I don't think Bedella would know to return them to their parents right? I'm glad that she and Michael are working things out between them and I wouldn't think he'd cheat since a wolf wouldn't cheat on his mate. I didn't understand why he was surprised she didn't know he wanted her all those years if he was openly screwing most of the females in the department. That isn't usually a tip off that a guy wants you and I wouldn't think others would think it was either. I look forward to more since the chapter was a bit short. I hope to see them move forward either with her moving onto the pack lands or the request for her and her siblings to return were made.

Michelle keeps being called Mrs. Patterson as if being matted cancels her doctorate. I can understand the pack not knowing but at work... if I was her I'd be pissed. Good story though :)

Great story! Please keep writing.

dont skip the editors!

That after being told she was an orphan and feeling terribly alone her whole life, that upon being told she had a family she would be interested in finding out more about them. Seems a plot hole to me.