All Comments on 'Forgotten Ch. 09'

Awesome story so far.

Hope the next chapter is out soon and we dont have to wait another year tell your muse to stop being lazy no more vacation

I love your story although Carol doesn't deserve a mate for being such a conniving manipulative bitch.

Can't wait for more very cool story love it

Can't wait for more very cool story love it

but i am confused there is just to much going on at once plus Shell is way over dramatic about things in this chapter she seems like a bitter shrew. And what's up with the male bashing almost every conversation someone is saying something bitchy about the men in their lives?

There is no joy in this chapter either, aren't matings suppose to be joyful? They seem to be annoyed all the time? Where you perhaps annoyed when you wrote this? Not that I want the story to end I just hope there is going to be a up side soon.

Please post the next chapter soon!

Really enjoying this series. =)

@ Anonymous05/19/12

nobody is forcing you to sit there and read it. I have read plenty of werewolf stories where the matings aren't all happy 100% of the time, remember Shell didn't know she was a wolf for most of her life and to be honest that would just be boring if it was all happiness, just because this one wasn't all happy doesn't meant the writer wasn't happy. As for the man hating, I don't think it's that all, however I find it refreshing that the male isn't the typical domineering ass that so many of the authors on here portray them as. If you want weak female characters I think you'd be better off finding that elsewhere.

Great story so far. Really looking forward to the next chapter.

I just found this story and I am hooked.. please don't make me wait too long.. :)

I am loving this story!!!!! Please continue it!!!!!!!

You could have finished the sentence! We all would have eagerly read the next chapter any way. It will be entertaining enough just to read her reaction to the news and what she does to Michael afterward. I hope it won't be a year before we find out. I had almost forgotten about this story!

Cannot wait to read more!

you left it there?

when well we see more?

I need more Forgotten.......please?

I'm am so relieved to hear Carol has a mate and with Andrae too!!! Now she can finally move on and leave Mike and Shell alone!!!

I just had to let you know I just read Forgotten straight to the end.please please say that isn't the end.i love the story.it is of the best i have ever read. I can't wait for the rest.Than you so much for such wonderful stories.keep the great writting.

Please keep going!

Love the series just read it without stopping. Please continue to write! Hope to read more very soon.

just keep filling, just keep filling, ...

Its been right at a year since this was posted,im guessing this is it,or you are doing some rewriting on the next chapter,,filling in the gaps,as you said...im not hoping for an ending,,but stranger things have happened...Good story,shame to dissapoint your followers..

I just read this story from beginning to end. I loved it. Are you planning on finishing it!

Just so you know I just finished calling you a wide variety of colorful names. You have got to finish this.

whens the next chapter coming this is sooo good

Hello there this is such a great story and it has inspire me to write my own stories. It is great to see another Australian so good at this and I really hope you finish it as it would mean a lot to me if you would. Good luck with your writing and best of wishes

Just finished the series up to this point and now very disappointed to not see a finish to it. Hope you finish it in the future.

The Koi pond was seriously funny .I almost peed myself laughing .....Well done !!

I hope you do actually write the rest of the story. I am dying to find out how it ends

Stephen J

Another good story apparently unfinished and "Forgotten".

With them going 50 years between heats and having 5-6 pups at once, I was kind of expecting their pregnancies to be really long. Maybe someday we'll find out.

VERY GOOD, JUST FINISH I ALREADY!