All Comments on 'Fortune and Fortitude Pt. 03'

Wow, i didn't see that coming! Well done, your imagination never fails to impress. I think snagging mom...

Hopefully you don't make Jared so hesitant and self conscious forever but so far I'm enjoying this story

This is getting spicy, what a turn of events! The fact that all the proteges are part of the harem now is icing on the cake for me. Cherry on top would be that they add their mother to the harem too. 😈

Jared irritates me, so often did I stop and think, "shut up limp-sick, your best friend/fiancee wants to have sex with you & is ok with you sleeping with other women, yet here you are whining about no longer being sexuality repressed like it's a bad thing." Yet, I don't think that's a bad thing, as you have established a character with morals & motivations that he wants to stick to.

I think kiara should be first to join the harem! Gratitude of a sort for her life being saved

Brother and sister? You really need to take this out of Romance category. Interesting story, but not Romance!

It is very interesting and go on with the next chapter. Thanks.

Are you going to write another chapter?

Ok Lerena I have now read everything you have written and i am thoroughly addicted. You must do something because I am jonesing like crazy for a Lerena fix! You are a great writer and you draw me as a reader in.

Unfortunately, this is where I bow out. Your writing is thought provoking and the plot line is developing quite nicely. Granted, I think Quin's momma is a stark-raving bitch, esp for a succubus, but she is what she is. Lol.

However, as I'm not a fan of incest, I'll show myself out. You have talent, and I hope you go far. Please, keep it up.

Sc8

His weird religious driven conditions on taking more harem members have got to go. They are a major hindrance to the story and are absolutely reducing the potential for spontaneity and practicality for power increases in a quickly approaching apocalyptic world.now the hell is he going to add more harem girls in a pinch he can’t and it’s bad. He has to get an official Christian ceremony every time? Absolutely awful

Lol a twist keep em comin