Found Pt. 08

I know you want to know about The Twenty and the mentoring program. It was a fantastic success. None of them came with husbands. A fact that was not lost on Jenny, Sara, Beth, and Phoebe. They did bring partners, sisters, friends, and business partners. Eventually, I will write those stories about the success and sex we had.

The End

Author's Note: The original ending included Sara's death. My original thinking had me making room for Jenny. The story still has remnants where I discuss getting sick, Steve's discovery, Jenny's letter, and then recovery. The funeral was alluded to and would have been very emotional. I even had tears writing it. I felt so silly tearing to a story character's death. I generally prefer a happy ending, the main topic (sex) is a happy topic for many. This is creative writing though and emotions are a large part of sex. Combining the two offers lots of power to the emotional side.

I presented both sides, in general and in this case, was I right to keep Sara alive?