All Comments on 'Four Virgins'

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HardBenHardBen6 months ago

Lucky boy!

A great erotic story. Well written too.

Thanks for sharing

Ben

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

So beautiful ❤️😍

TarissaTarissa5 months ago

I wished you would've just went with a group sex scene with everyone losing their virginity and left it open ended.

The way you ended was a huge let down as well. 2/5

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Well with a title like "Four Virgins" along with those tags, I thought this should be a pretty good story and it was up to around 70% into the first page, I mean everyone was naked and it was going in a good direction, at this point it was a 4/5 easily but then you just random stopped the scene right as it was getting good and it just went downhill from there until that awful ending.

Like if he was only going to end up having sex with 2 of them and only date 1 of them, then why even bother having 4 of them? 1/5

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