All Comments on 'Fox in the Henhouse'

“Living in the money”?

That really ruined the money for me.

Takes the reader out of the money.

If you have a money, you may want to fix that.

A single typo ruined the entire story for you? Jesus christ. Either way, I really enjoyed this story. A single typo didn't bother me one guy

I think you have a good storyline going, please continue it .. I hope that she does get her feminine body back .. it is an informative walk on the male side, but must be pretty disappointing .. I wish that I was fully female .. yes, I know what would be pointed out as downsides, but I think that it adds a richness to life that guys don't experience ..