All Comments on 'Frank Brings a Friend to Play'

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LSantiagoLSantiagoover 2 years ago

these are powerfull stories, there are several ways to list stories as a series it would help readers like me who like to read stories as their writers intended . These stories are ralatively short how if you write one more put a coment as a header giving the list and order. Put out an Omnibuss story and if were to expand it would be a bonus. This is my only critical part of my review. Otherwise this is a wonderfully erotic story, about adults respecting each other without all the adolecent elements of the genre

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The old man is finally exploring his sexuality now that society won't murder him for doing so. Most of it is just fantasy or wishful thinking. "The Real Story of Barbara and I" is non-fiction. This story is historically accurate. "Frank Brings a Friend" and "Babs & Frank...