by Torchlusspanik_2
really liked it but was disapointed that you did not write nother chapter on what happened after.
I liked parts of your story; others, not so much. I think your MC is kind of a creep, but I suppose the story comes out ok...for now. But you're a very good writer so keep on the journey.
Thanks for the comments!
I have ideas for 2 follow ups but not got around to writing them. Any ideas - please share!
The MC is meant to be creepy! He's a combination of a popular British TV host currently hosting on BBC Radio 2 and old school 1970's comics.