by CJtheTraveler
I loved the feelings this story gave me. So easy to feel the Good Girl myself.
It was good, but it could have been oh so much more with a little effort, back story and fleshing out. It could have been an amazing series. I find it interesting, you are one of the few people who also see Subspace/subconscious to being connected. I used to own a slave who I could give suggestions while I had her in subspace. We had an some amazing expereinces with it.
Who are they, o workers, husband and wife, ride? Why does he need to hypnotize her? Story needs a little background and setup.